星期二, 4月 25, 2006

Does modern technology make life more convenient, or was life better when technology was simpler?

As technology is becoming more advanced than ever, most of products are designed to make our life more convenient. Nevertheless, has technology has changed our life into a simple and easy “neo-life style”, or on contrary, has technology made our life more complicated? This is a question worth thinking.

As technology development advances, the level of living standard increases. The life forwards wonderfully, we have fewer opportunities to waste our time and strength. Other person may has their own opinions, and argue that technology have interrupted our life and others already. The facts is, technology will keep improving and developing, no matter you agree with it or not.

In my opinion, technology changed our life into a simple and easy situation without question. We can really save our time and energy since technology has been improved and developed. There is no doubt humans have benefited by it. There are unaccountable information could come with technology, dreams could be realized by technology, wealth and property could be came by us with technology, etc. Technology is not only an abstract word in our cognition, but a process that involves everyday human lives.

We could visit some where we want to go simply, since people has invented automobile and improved it; we could through many areas and reach the other place on the earth, because of people has invented air craft and developed it; we could send sounds, messages, and images to our family and friends, for people inventing mobile phone and expanding it; we could process many data, due to the fact that people invented computers and bourgeoned it; we could enrich our amusements, on account of the invention of TV, projector, and DVD player. Above this paragraph are the advantages of technology; no one can deny that technology exists with those advantages. We should be optimistic about it, and keep assisting and enjoying everything technology has brought to our life.

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Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Hello
You have many good ideas. It would be much better if you can organize your ideas and express them logically and clearly

Technology is becoming more advanced than ever, most of all products are being more convenience because of its developed basing on technology; nevertheless, technology changed our life into a simple and easy neo-life style, or technology made our life on contrary. Questions we have mentioned ( above ) may involving our thinking.

-->This sentence is a bit too long. Long sentences tend to be confusing. I suggest that you divide it into two or three sentences.


more convenience-->more convenient

Technology is becoming more advanced than ever, most of all products are being more convenience because of its developed basing on technology
-->As technology..., most of products are designed to make our life more convenient.



technology changed our life into a simple and easy neo-life style, or technology made our life on contrary-->?? what do you mean here?
-->Does technology make life better?

Questions we have mentioned ( above ) may involving our thinking
-->This is a question worth thinking.


Technology keeps its development furthering, and the level of our life follows suit.
-->As technology development advances, the level of living standard increases.

The life forwards wonderfully, we can waste our time and strength with less opportunities.
-->?? not very clear


The facts that technology will keep improving and developing, no matter you agree with it or not.
-->The fact is, technology...


We really could save our time and strength, since technology improved it’s development, it’s true and no suspect, human benefited by it.
-->sentence structure

There are unaccountable information could be gained by technology, dreams could be realized by technology, wealth and property could be came by us with technology, etc.
-->could come with...


Technology will not only a word with abstract meaning in our cognition, it lives with a neo-style, and involves our human life,
-->Technology is not only an abstract word..., but a process that involves everyday human lives.



due to people invented computers and bourgeoned it;
-->due to +noun (clause)
-->due to the fact that...


we could enrich our amusements, on account of people invented TV, projector, and DVD player.


-->on account of sth FORMAL because of something
-->On account of the invention of TV...



Above of this paragraph are advantages of technology, no one could argue that the technology existing with those advantages.

-->What mentioned above are advantages of technology.


1. Try organize your paragraphs into three section: the introduction, the body text, and the conclusion.
2. Avoid very long sentences.
3. check usage of expression (due to, on account of...)and proofread before publish it.

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